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Dark Poetry #3

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MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-07-16 01:29 AM

Embedded Journals
of thoughtless thoughts
Originaly Perverse
Its silver overwrought

Indulged by speech
Seperated by night
Fading by page
Meaning to contrite

Imperialistic writes
Of Ignorant's curse
Torn & cheated
Amongst their verse

A Prevailing edge
On a willted sheet
Holds the innocence
Making this woman
Once again . . . Complete

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-07-16 05:28 PM

I like.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-07-16 09:09 PM

Very nice indeed. squirrel dude should have almost enough of these to fill a dark journal.

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

3 posted 2002-07-17 02:23 AM

"Imperialistic writes
Of Ignorant's curse
Torn & cheated
Amongst their verse"

Imperialistic writes...
Imperialistic rites...
(of Ignorant's curse)

Just saw this pun in your awesome poem. Good job, indeed!

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

4 posted 2002-07-19 04:13 AM

"Indulged by speech
Seperated by night"

"A Prevailing edge
On a willted sheet"

these are lines i wish i'd thought of.

*chils*
what a fun read.
dark and forboding book...
i like it.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-07-19 10:55 AM

I love it!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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