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red rose and black ink
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
red rose and black ink blue moon and tattered sky nothing left to feel or think the reasons why life passes me by stars shimmer and sail away nothing to do with me you see never come back another day the darkness sees how i bleed the water drips tears blur can't see my life not yet a gift but still a curse not yet a blessing but still in strife when will my light find me my ears are deaf and lips are closed nothing here to feel or see my whole life and future harshly loathed the sky is blank yet my heart won't look upon the evening at the shadows cursed my world and blessed the book bloody earth and bloody meadows life and death are not too close curse the world and take my life i hate myself and heart the most i call it not a place but knife red rose and black ink blue moon and tattered sky nothing left to feel or think the reasons why life passes me by i'm not sure if anybody would understand this, but hey! i thought, it's worth a try! |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
stars shimmer and sail away nothing to do with me you see never come back another day the darkness sees how i bleed I love your poem...and I can understand. Heather |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
All of your work gets better, with each verse. I loved it! You laugh at me, because i'm different. |
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idrift2u Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60MD., USA |
Very nice, Great imagery Next stop, star base 99... Thanks |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Roses! So many roses! Awesome poem. Welcome to th' soily corner of th' web we like to call th' Dark! Well, I like to call it that anyway... Um ... Yeah. She said burn ... together. |
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