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samonapj
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 6

0 posted 2002-07-10 05:16 PM

I wrote this particular poem last night when I had a surge of emotion surging through myself. I can relate to this. This is my second poem I have written, I was just wondering what you thought?

Tides of Time- 7-10-2002
The Tides of time
The rigor the sweat
All will pass all promises met
As the pendulum swings what new days may bring
The tides of time begin to sing
Until tomorrow more pain more sorrow
What woes may arise in such horrible hours
But in the end the tides recede
And dreams are met with satisfaction indeed

[This message has been edited by samonapj (07-10-2002 05:28 PM).]

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-07-10 05:34 PM

Hey Amon

A great, great piece here, mate. I enjoyed it immenseley. It's a powerful look at the passing of time, of life with sorrow and sadness, hopes dashed and hopes realized. Dealing with the ups, all the while dealing with the lows. You handeled that well, my friend.

~Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

samonapj
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 6

2 posted 2002-07-11 11:51 AM

Thanks for the reply Titus, your comments are very welcome, I appreciate it.

GoddessofHell
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since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

3 posted 2002-07-11 05:06 PM

Very nice....

Heather

shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

4 posted 2002-07-11 06:19 PM

that could be a song you know, if you made it longer...or else it could be a short song...wonderful! loved it.

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bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-07-13 07:21 PM

Cool! Keep writin'!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

samonapj
New Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 6

6 posted 2002-07-13 07:24 PM

Thank you for the motivation, unfortunately I find that I write best when I have an overflow of emotion (like many poets). It isn't me writing, it is my feelings depicted in words. Nonetheless that won't stop me from trying, I am also working on a book to write, a Kurt Vonnegut style esqe book. Thanks for the comments!

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