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Anvrill
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0 posted 2002-06-30 10:17 AM


Oh, sweet, I found my old vampire poetry! Like from when I was 14. Ask Mike how much I used to write, then multiply his answer by ten, and you've got a pretty accurate number. (well, if he answers properly)

Anyway, because it's cute, here's one of the little blurby poem thingies I had. (And I may start posting the more respectable ones too; I rehashed a few, and they had images that actually work.)

Here we go.



Bring me the blood
Bring me the tears
As long as you can
Destroy all my fears

A simple exchange
To let it all go
Blood for blood
To a life I can’t know



Aw, isn't that cute? This is what I did instead of math in math class in grade 9. And I still passed with honors.

"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch.

© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2002-06-30 12:40 PM


Kudos to you for suffering through those endless fractions and equations with quick, impeccable skill, afording you time for more constructive mental uses! I dig this, as it brought back a lot of memories. I thought of the time when I was fanatical about the music of Air Supply, and then they came out with this totally out there dark album, all of the guys dressed in black, lead singer showing off his tatoos, and them doing songs like "Bread & Blood" in lieu of the once syruppy "All Out of Love" pretties... Indeed, this was "cute" in a gothic sorta way...lol
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-06-30 01:14 PM


Awwww. Look everybody! Th' fawn's learning to stand on her own legs.

Just kiddin', babygrrl. Loved this. Sure beats By 13.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

devina
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Cali
3 posted 2002-06-30 01:53 PM


funny how our thoughts are damn close now to the years back then...

sometimes I think I knew more then!! lol

now you've got me diggin through my own dark journals girlie...OH what a task!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-06-30 04:21 PM


My own dark journals?!?! Somebody write that into a poem, NOW!

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

devina
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Cali
5 posted 2002-06-30 05:33 PM


Are you takin the combative stance with that command Mike????

Now Lori..you know he expects us all to JUMP to it....

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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