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Ocean Beauty Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 18VT, USA |
Glass... Broken pieces scattered everywhere. I brace myself, knowing what I am about to go through. Each little sliver piercing through my skin, It hurts no matter what I try to do to stop it. I walk as slowly and carefully as I can, knowing there is no other way around. Tears stream down my face silently because I know screaming won't help. I am all alone, no one even trying to lend a hand. Here I am: blood, sweat, and tears staining my skin as I walk on these slivers of glass most commonly known as... Life |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes sometimes it is just like this...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow!  Welcome to DP This is great!!  LOVE ELMO |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We all just need thicker soles(souls)...I enjoyed this poem. Welcome to the family. Please check your email!  |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Very nice. Everyone finds in one time of their lif or the other, life will seem to come crashing down. However, the wounds on the feet will heal, just as life does. Things only get better from here. Keep writing my friend! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is a very good use of the metaphor here. . . I could feel the sting of every piece. . . welcome. . . please take a moment to look around. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Such a wonderful comparison. Life is defined by pain and suffering. Enjoyed, James Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace. |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Welcome, welcome, welcome...to our world of darkness and despair.... Wonderful first post. Awaiting more. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
On the edge it is, and sharp though it be, glass may also brighten life, and that is certainteed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OceanBeauty~ WOW ! ... Welcome to Passions~ Very, very nicely emoting of feeling~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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