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the merging of minds
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the merging of minds |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
the merging of minds he and i like two hesitant hovering creatures in a moment of silence my eyes find his and i can feel the gears in his head slowing down his thoughts slowly dripping away his head emptying until we have reached a perfect understanding my mind is his in the darkness and all that is left is the peaceful silence and the merging of minds. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
until we have reached a perfect understanding my mind is his in the darkness and all that is left is the peaceful silence and the merging of minds I concept I understand well... Nice write...  K |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
That was extremely pretty. I loved the way you put everything so nicely. I'm truly sorry, i wish i could comment on knowing the feeling, but i wouldn't really know how it feels. It was a very good piece tho " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Love how you put it across Shira "and all that is left is the peaceful silence and the merging of minds." Good to read you again. Take care! ~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
Souns like the peace of non-physical touch. Nice read Thanks for sharing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Silentsky, Good to read you again, beautiful words! Strong emotion! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
What a unique expression of togetherness. Works non-verbal and telepathic. I know exactly what you are talking about even though my soulmate is living somewhere else now the 'link' still works. What you describe is something to strive for. Hope it will last for you! Merging minds don't need words...and the eyes only seem to be a window into our soul. Thanks for this one, Silentsky. (-And thanks for the lovely comment you left for me the other day.) Bee. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I found this read to be very interesting. I love the description of the minds merging as one. very nice!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
A feeling that I've always wanted but never got so far! Your very lucky indeed, beautiful piece of writing! |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
I totally understood what you were saying. The theme of this poem was really well thought out and all its greatness lied between the lines.. great job. Jeremy "zzzIzzzAMzzzJEREMYDRAULzzz" |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
You do this amazingly well. I can feel, see, touch the minds as they merge...I love the way you describe it here! I am many. |
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