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Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2001-11-25 11:07 PM

And here we are just children of our own demise
And longing still for words to be passed from the wise
For the ones who came before us are now dead and gone
And for those who shall be tomorrow, there's nothing to
carry on...

And now we are alone
The truth shall fall from the skies no more
And all our counted days
Are like ships on the grave ocean's floor

And here we are all bound by our own fettered chains
The key to unlock our chances no longer remains
The elders spoke, long ago, prophecies foretold
But silent sounds are all that's now left to hold...

And still we are alone
Hope is alive in this place no more
For closed eyes can only see
The shadow of our remorse.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2001-11-26 04:42 AM

I very much enjoyed this one, excellent!!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2001-11-26 12:06 PM

Nice.

Really liked this one ...

~verve

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-27 05:28 AM

Well written words there

Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2001-11-27 08:26 PM

Many could liken themselves to the feelings portrayed here.
But happily I do not, I know right where I am, what I'm doing and where I plan to go!!!

Well written Purity,
Isis

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

5 posted 2001-11-27 10:51 PM

There are so many that are alone. Maybe all the lonely people need a way to get in touch with all he other lonely people. Damn.. that internet thing is a reality isn't it. Seriously my friend lonely and alone are two different things as I'm very sure you know. Even though you and another may be alone, lonely shouldn't ever enter that equation(?) as long as you are both in the now and not in the past or future. Also, those that are not purely blind can still see light through closed eyes. Love ya much, and remember I myself am not truly "alone". Oh yeah, another great write .

[This message has been edited by carolinadreams (edited 11-27-2001).]

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

6 posted 2001-11-27 11:03 PM

Well spoken, friend. Thanks, and once again I must say tooooosh..lol Shadow was originally written at a low point, just before that Eternal Mark placed itself... And he would benefit from "Sit if You Will", huh? Thanks for the criticism...and support.

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