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Dieing in the Distance
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Dieing in the Distance |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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Stand naked and exposed as incoherent whisper from me flows dripping my layers away in the rain of my inner termoiled day. Lonliness taking it's toll as it tears at my gapping soul and my understanding of this existance begins falling away from me, dieing in the distance. "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Alibaster, a very sad write! Think we have all been to this spot in life. Thank you for sharing.  smiles ~Marie~ |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
"and my understanding of this existance begins falling away from me, dieing in the distance." I know that feeling well. I spend much of my time asking "why, how, and what if"? Nicely done! And I lie here in bed all alone- I can't mend |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
I hope your loneliness is alleviated by us here! A very sad read, thought-provoking and inspiring, in a way. Does the name pavlov ring a bell? |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
All of your comments are greatly appriciated...thank you so much. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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