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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
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0 posted 2001-10-04 08:46 PM


A hole that can't be filled,
Piece by piece,
Day by day,
Her happiness,
Is shattering away,
It's hard for her to smile,
And easy for her to frown,
Her happy world,
Has been turned upside down,
Closer than ever,
To reaching that goal,
Then everything deteriorated,
And left her in the cold,
Crying no longer helps,
She is an empty shell,
No emotions,
No one to turn to,
I guess thats just the way she feels.

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-04 08:55 PM


Ah, I can relate to this today. I'm sure there will be light at the end of this dark tunnel for you. I sure hope so

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-10-06 01:08 AM


I too relate to your words.  Sometimes, we've cried all we can and just need to be for a while to figure out what is next for us.  I hope you find your destiny soon.  Well done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
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3 posted 2001-10-08 08:19 PM


Such sad words...

hope you feel better...

~Tier

LadyPeach1
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4 posted 2001-12-30 07:53 PM


Mom, this one is for you

qtpieelmo
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5 posted 2002-01-03 10:28 AM


Wow, the day when you no longer have tears, feeling empty & soul less--I know these feeling all too well--One day you will smile again & feel again & it feels like you were just awoken again--Yea I probably make no sense, but I can relate to this! ELMO
DawnG
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6 posted 2002-01-03 01:21 PM


This is very sad. I hope your Mom feels better soon.

                  Dawn

angel_face_35
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7 posted 2002-01-03 08:05 PM


i can totally relate to that. great poem. ~*~Kellie~*~
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-01-03 09:16 PM


No one wants to go through this yet we all do and you just have to ride it through...one day in your future you will awake and clearly see the new blessings coming your way...James
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