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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-31 03:23 PM


They see us together
you lift me in the air
and carry me around
and we're together.

I'm just your little ho.
that's what you call me.
I know you don't mean it,
and that I'm Justin's Girl.

I don't know if I want to be,
the girl in Justin's Girl.
Or if there's another part of me,
that I just haven't found.

They see us together
and they assume the best
that we've kissed and made up
even though we haven't yet.

I'm just your little ho.
The one you call every night.
To keep you company
and your momma doesn't know.

I don't know if I want to be,
your little ho,
the girl in Justin's Girl,
or something else.


Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Sheilan
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1 posted 2001-08-01 01:22 AM


I believe there is an answer to your I don't know.... isn't it answer enough that you don't?  You deserve to be more than "Justin's girl".  Life is confusing enough, life with someone should be easier not harder.


Jessica
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2 posted 2001-08-01 02:50 AM


I agree with Sheilan. Isn't it enough? I loved the poem... and I do understand that it isn't quite that easy to know if it's "enough" or not... Great write!
Hellseyes
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3 posted 2001-08-01 11:03 AM


this is a great write...you are a great poet, and you express what we all wish we could.../Drew/
Allysa
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4 posted 2001-08-01 12:32 PM


Sometimes, it depends though.  I want to be Justin's Girl, because when I am/was Justin's Girl, the way we were together was just awesome.  He's the nicest, sweetest guy I know, but I gotta figure things out.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

qtpieelmo
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5 posted 2001-08-01 09:35 PM


Wow--your Justin & my Keith must be related--lol--I really liked this   LOVE ELMO <3
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