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pixiechild
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0 posted 2001-02-11 12:20 PM


What a scary thought indeed  
of almost loosing a friend I truelly need
Realizing alot today
making me glad in every way
that our friendship didn't come to an end
and that you can still be my friend

This made me change my feeling
and now I know our friendship has a meaning
I'm really glad this experience helped me to see
what your friendship really means to me

Hope you are alright
cause it couldn't have been a pretty sight
You most probably had such a fright
that kept you up all night

I feel sorry for you my friend
for coming so close to the end
Now you know I really care
loosing your friendship I'll never bare

© Copyright 2001 Chantelle - All Rights Reserved
~sugarpie313~
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1 posted 2001-02-11 12:37 PM


This is very good. It's scary when you almost lose a friend that means so much to you. What a great way to express it to your friend. I hope you guys are best buddies forever!!    

~VALERIE~

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2001-02-11 01:09 PM


It is scary when you believe you've lost a friend. Hope everything remains kosher for you guys!

xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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3 posted 2001-02-11 06:04 PM


I'm glad you didn't have to go thru loosing a friend.  It is most defenitely hard.  Funny how unfortunate events make us realize how much more we actually care for others

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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4 posted 2001-02-12 06:24 PM


Good to see it was only a close call eh?
Nice one.......friends go through times and if they prevail they know that it's all worth it....that the friendship is a true one.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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