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pixiechild
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since 2001-02-02
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0 posted 2001-02-11 03:47 AM




U make me happy and u make me sad
now sometimes this can be good and bad
In this case I don't know
not even someone can tell me so
What we have confusses me alot
whether the feeling is mutual or not
That's the part I can't figure out,
but tell me..what is our friendship really about?

Was it destiny for us to meet
or was it just because I friend I need
Alot of diffrent thoughts running through my mind,
some weird,nice,happy and sad..just about every kind
but what troubles me most of all now
is our friendship growing? in what way and how?

Will we ever be more than just friends
or will we have an everlasting love that never ends?
Who I ask can answer all my questions,
and what is your true intentions?
Words and actions differ in every way
and it gets more confussig every day

Is it your fault I fell in love with u?
and if it is I don't want to blame u, to be true,
U are everything I ever asked for
nothing about my past matters anymore
My life and love I want to share with u alone
To u and the rest I want to make it known.

U know what I feel for u,
Maybe someday u know my love is true,
Put me out of my confussion any time soon
hopefully I find out Friday after noon,
Then we shall meet again
no longer after that i shall be in vain






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Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 325
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1 posted 2001-02-11 08:21 AM


awww thats sweet. I don't know why sweet comes to mind but it just does. I hope things work out for you and the person this is about. Great poem keep it up.

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pixiechild
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since 2001-02-02
Posts 35

2 posted 2001-02-11 11:15 AM


thanks..lol. i hope so too. thank u for reading my work.

pix

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
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Twilight Zone
3 posted 2001-02-11 05:50 PM


Have you asked him what's up?
So, what's going in now?
he he he -- I'm being nosy
well, if you haven't asked, go ask him
let us know what happens  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
Posts 176
Virginia
4 posted 2001-02-11 08:52 PM


How about the title: You and me

good poem, keep writing.

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5 posted 2001-02-12 06:26 PM


nicely done here, very sweet.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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