The Million Pieces of Who I am (Part 1 of 3)

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Fading Away

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0 posted 2001-04-14 02:48 PM

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Ina
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1 posted 2001-04-14 02:55 PM

this was awesome! i cant wait for the rest of it.

REgina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

anonymous albert ?

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2 posted 2001-04-14 03:05 PM

yep....one word...AWESOME!nicely done marie.keep writin

Linc

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3 posted 2001-04-14 06:58 PM

Speechless...I only have ULI and I will reply again later when I am not speechless

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Allan Riverwood

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4 posted 2001-04-14 08:19 PM

Very interesting... the last line was out of nowhere, it made me read this over and over.  Outstanding.
You do realize that, mathematically, if you post by the 100 in this series that part three will land on your 900th post, and not your 1000th right?
Stretch it out into a four-part.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Child of the Stars

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5 posted 2001-04-14 08:56 PM

OOooooOOOOoooOOOOooo I loved it.

~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

Fading Away

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6 posted 2001-04-14 11:09 PM

That's true, Allan.. but you know how fast I post

I was planning when I first posted it to post each after 150. I may write a 4th in the series, just because you asked me to

Thanks for the replies everyone.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

banburycross
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viginia

7 posted 2001-04-15 12:50 PM

you amaze me love...

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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8 posted 2001-04-15 01:55 AM

To be honest......I fell in love with this poem. Something about the imagery was amazing. Something about the whole way it was portrayed really hit home with me. This is by far one of my favs. I know a lot of writers who write amazing stuff, but don't connect with me. These images are images that could very well take place in my future.....in anybody's future....and I loved this.....very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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9 posted 2001-04-16 02:37 PM

Thanks for the replies everyone. Javi - I'm glad you liked it so much!
The second one will be posted at 850.
Thanks again for the replies

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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