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Paula Finn
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missouri

0 posted 2001-01-21 04:50 AM


People find hope in
   the strangest of places
In the song of a poet
In the music of the wind
In a glimpse of a tear
In a softly spoken word
They are filled with a sense of

HAVING
ONLY
POSITIVE
EMOTIONS

They carry on through
   all thier pain
Always keeping heart
Always carrying hope
Believing in dreams
Trusting in something more
Something that is

FOUND
ALL
IN
THE
HEART

They are the ones who
   find their strength
Not in words but in deeds
Not in symbols but in serenity
Not in power but in peace
And they are there by

GIVING
REMEMBERING
ACCEPTING
COMMITTING
EVERYTHING

And the greatest of these

LOVE



© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Mr.Magoo
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1 posted 2001-01-21 06:26 AM


I think we are always looking for hope in one way or another.
Sometimes we find it at the most unlikely of times.
Thank you for the reality check.
very nice.
                    Mr.Magoo

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-01-21 07:28 AM


Paula,
Hope, faith, grace and love, what an unbeatable combination! Lovely poem!
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-01-21 07:48 AM


Good mixing, Paula, of Acrostic and Poetry...good thoughts too...thank you for sharing...
Marsha
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4 posted 2001-01-21 08:00 AM


Paula love, this is truly utterly wonderful love, it really is. A fabulous piece from you dear heart, and I love it
Take care love as always
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-01-21 08:02 AM


People find hope in
   the strangest of places
In the song of a poet
In the music of the wind
In a glimpse of a tear
In a softly spoken word
==================
very cool and creative work Paula ...
I ditto Suns reply...
very well done girlie-girl
jm


When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

VAS
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6 posted 2001-01-21 08:30 AM


Wonnerful, wonnerful!

Beautifully woven, Paula, superb flow of lovely truths.

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 2001-01-21 08:56 AM


I love the passage from the bible regarding this....great poem  
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-01-21 09:04 AM


Paula~
What a lovely Sunday morning treat for me to read.
Thank you for sharing so much of you.
I send prayers that all may find that of which you have written.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
9 posted 2001-01-21 09:09 AM


Putting things in perspective
Always nice to be reminded
And in such a lovely way
Thank you
Liz

insect
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10 posted 2001-01-21 02:45 PM


Very nice Paula
I like how you put this together
Wonderful write!

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
11 posted 2001-01-21 02:50 PM


Yep, you've said it all Paula.  Have to agree with every word.  Neat!

jwesley

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
12 posted 2001-01-21 02:51 PM


I like the thoughts expressed in this piece.  Nicely penned.

Poeminister

"It is our business to go as we are impelled."
~ D.H. Lawrence

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2001-01-21 03:02 PM


Paula I have read and enjoyed...I will read this many times...James
Paula Finn
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missouri
14 posted 2001-01-23 12:17 PM


Mr. Magoo...people always look for hope...it has always amazed me the places they find it...thanks

Kethry...goes together like milk and cookies huh? Thanks

Sunshine...I wasnt trying to do this...it just seemed to flow out...thank you

Marsha sweetie...you are so good for me love...thanks

Janet...thanks girlie glad you liked this

VAS...it did just flow as I was writing...thank you

hoot_owl_rn...I too love that particular message...thank you

Marge...thank you sweet lady

Liz...sometimes we need to have someone remind us that there are other things...better things...than you

Insect...than you

jwesley...LOL neat...thats just perfect...thanks

Poeminister...Im glad you like this thank you

James...you honour me friend thank you


peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
15 posted 2001-01-23 02:17 AM


Yes, it is....and I simply love your words

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

peppermint35
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Texas, USA
16 posted 2001-01-23 02:18 AM


Yes, it is....and I simply love your words

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Paula Finn
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missouri
17 posted 2001-01-28 03:00 PM


Pepper..thank you I appreciate your replies
Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
18 posted 2001-01-29 02:28 AM


stunning

it's not that you have faith in the right thing or not, it's more important to simply have faith...

dig it.

You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass.

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