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Verma
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since 1999-10-25
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Midlands, England

0 posted 2001-01-19 01:14 PM


In hope

Hold me close, to you this day
Tell me how you want me to stay
Your love I need, for this I pray
Do not go, don’t leave me this way

My heart feels torn, like a baby new born
From the safety it’s known, inside mother, alone…

The day will come, of this I’m sure,
When to have another, you’ll want no more
Once you reach, this stage in life,
I’ll hold out my hand & take you for my wife….


~~STEVE~~


© Copyright 2001 Steve Verma - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2001-01-19 03:08 PM


awwww geez... thanks, steve!! i'll let you know when i'm ready for that again.. LOL.. for now, let's just go out dancing or something and have a nice candlelit dinner, k? hehe...

seriously, though, what adoring thoughts you have here and i'm sure your love will treasure this poem!  

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
2 posted 2001-01-20 07:55 PM


Oh, this is just beautiful!  Lucky lady you're talking about here!  Great write!

sp  


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

WinterTalon
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since 2001-01-14
Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA
3 posted 2001-01-20 08:00 PM


Purtiful!


~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~


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