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phone puzzle at tutorial time |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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nervous incessant ring of a phone someone, a bespectacled person, a stranger picks it up "harlow?" "sorry, wrong number" laughter erupted like the climax of a recital, died down, like the soft hiss of waves on sand, then stopped, like no leaves to sway in the wind leaving me wondering why we laughed [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WOW! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is really great, you made me smile  -SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you, both doreen and SEA, both your replies gave me a smile  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow, what an amusing poem! Yes, it is really interesting when you laugh spontaneously to realize why you laughed, like on The Simpsons that happens all the time. Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh this is a great one! heeheehee.. love this little funny..good question too--just why is that so darned funny?? LOL but it is...and a cheap laugh is better than no laughter.... hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you, Noah and dg for responding...i was thinking this poem was a cheap piece and its thought insignificant and was delighted to find that others appreciated that moment of laughing but not knowing exactly why... thank you |
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