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Open Poetry #12

Fly Petals Fly

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-01-17 01:59 PM

Fly Petals Fly
~*~
Tears flow,
into the heart of the rose,
crashing,
breaking into a million teardrops,
the rosebud hides in the cacoon of self,
as petals yearn to fly in the wind

BloomingRose

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-17 02:02 PM

Ever wonder why a rose has so many petals huddled together in the middle? Because it is God's way of protecting the heart of the beautiful rose.

Wonderfully descriptive write my friend. Loved the use of the metaphor

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-01-18 01:29 AM

"the rosebud hides in the cacoon of self,"

I just love the sound of that.....so beautiful

-SEA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-01-20 01:21 AM

BloomingRose~
Again, a gentle thought that lays easy in the heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-01-20 01:24 AM

Lovely poem. Beautifully penned.

Poeminister

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-01-20 01:27 AM

Very ethereal and poignant.

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