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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-01-16 07:45 PM



INSPIRATION

Let them loose your fine penned rhymes
Send to me sounds of chimes and melodies
Reflect upon me your thoughts and wishes
Untie your troubles, free your anguish
Inspire me you marvel of words so true

Release your needs to the scent of roses
Infiltrating hands inking a new line
Gently and gracefully inscribing perfection
Of letters into words of perpetual motion
Free your anger turning into a rage of smiles
Inspire me you faithful poet of verses so true

As you write your feelings to inspire
Let the breeze bring in a fragile butterfly
To rest upon your quill, guiding you once more
To shape sentences in colours of rainbows
From deep within your heart and soul
Inspire me with your dreams my poet friend
Inspire me once more to face another day


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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1 posted 2001-01-16 07:57 PM


Inspire me once more to face another day
give me your smile......a kiss......a promise of love

tell me with colors......with touch
I need the strength of knowing
when I come home.......I'll see you

Share with me this night
love my cares away
Inspire me once more to face another day.......



Thanks for the inspiration! This is wonderful!!!   -SEA

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2 posted 2001-01-16 08:21 PM


beautifully written JD...loved it..

                ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-01-16 08:27 PM


"Let the breeze bring in a fragile butterfly
To rest upon your quill, guiding you once more
To shape sentences in colours of rainbows"

Beautiful lines. Excellent writing.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


Daniel J D
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4 posted 2001-01-16 09:04 PM


SEA,
You have made this poem sound so much better. You are a real dream, thank you so very much.

Victoria,
Your kind and thoughtful words are appreciated, Cheers.

Poeminister,
Thank you my dear friend, I am so glad you liked this one.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Daniel J D
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6 posted 2001-01-17 06:48 PM


SEA,
You are a real gem.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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DJD~ so are you sweetie   -SEA
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8 posted 2001-01-17 06:59 PM


this breaks my heart!

Kathleen


Daniel J D
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9 posted 2001-01-17 07:08 PM


Kathleen,
I hope you are fine, how can I ever thank you and so many others at Passions. The fine poems that are written are so real, so beautiful, they bring with them news of pain and sorrow, happiness and love. But most of all they are from the finest poets on earth. Thank you.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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