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0 posted 2001-01-13 01:27 PM



Banty Love
Virginia Salter

Little banty
on the stoop
gazing at
the chicken coop.

Little red hen
preening comb
for her trip
away from home.

Startled is
old banty, cold,
“Why can I not
be a bit more bold?”

He sees her loaded
into the truck,
In his mind,
exclaims, “What luck!”

“There she goes
away from me
in the lolly
toward the sea,

what shall I do,
what might I say,
to bring her back
no more to stray?”

“Look, oh, look!
from bump a rise,
her cage does fly
before my eyes!

Out of sprung door
my sweetheart flies.”
I run, I run
up to her side.

We peck, we neck
we cling by wing;
inside of me,
my heart’s a-ring!

“Oh, Sweet One,
no more shall I
sit on the stoop
so idly by.”


© January 13, 2001
© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-13 01:29 PM


This is so cute! Made me smile. If you are comfortable with the idea, may we use this for the newsletter?
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2 posted 2001-01-13 01:38 PM


Wow, Elizabeth, whatever for, it's just a silly love poem?  Where does the newsletter go, or is it a cyber newsletter?  I don't know if I'd want people that have not seen some of my other poetry to think this was a good sample.  Vanity, oh where will you take me? ;o}  I just like to choose the way I embarrass myself, so I'm not sure.
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3 posted 2001-01-13 10:56 PM


Virginia, the newsletter is called Digital Passions and is a cyber newsletter. I'm not sure exactly how many people read it....Ron would know the exact number. It's quite a few though. The upcoming issue is going to be a special for Valentine's Day, and I just thought it would be nice to have a fun love poem besides all the other ones. If you don't want it included that's fine too! Just thought I'd ask.  
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