as the flame turns to white

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Open Poetry #12

as the flame turns to white

DUSTY
New Member

since 2001-02-15

Posts 4

0 posted 2001-02-15 11:54 AM

while your presents grows nearer the embers in my heart burns to bright white .the chemical reaction
fuses my sight as i only see as one into your eyes
of this passionate flight ,the venture we seek
into the unknowen bonds us like magnets ,as we go foward in this flight ,you are my angel ,and daughter of the wind,as the past shadows the present
the myth becomes reality ,and my love merges into my soul so we can be as one looking through the eyes of heaven

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-02-15 01:36 PM

Welcome, I don't think I've seen you before,
I enjoyed this, and I too have trouble sometimes with the spacing, did you know you have 24 hours to edit? It's a pain isn't it? Keep writing and good to have you here

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2001-02-15 02:50 PM

this was really beautiful.
your words paint such wonderful images.
enjoyed this immensly.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

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