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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-14 09:02 AM



Passions Fire Heated Desire


I float in loves’ arms while I’m with you
And with loves’ aroma my body you bedew
The flames of spent passion still lick at me
Wonder and delight in this heats mystery
Your skin touching mine brings loves heat
Wondrous delight wrapped in a heartbeat

On a magic journey into this desires flame
And in mere minutes I’m flying there again
How do you send me spiraling faster higher?
From where do you produce your liquid fire?
With just a simple touch I’m bound to you
And here I’ll stay until eternity is through

I’ll live here forever touching this delight
All I comprehend is it’s found in your sight
Never did I understand the questions I had
Only that my heart seemed lonely and sad
And now I realise that I have a life to live
In feeding this flame I have wonder to give

United in ecstasy together we dance in fire
As the flames ever present take us higher
Among the stars we dance in passions flight
Dimming their glory with our shining light
The flames that heat us seem never to fade
This incandescence puts stars in the shade


Marsha



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-14 12:51 PM


Hot Hot Hot

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2 posted 2001-02-14 02:31 PM


(sigh) Such a warm, passionate poem, Marsha! You have indeed captivated the magic of loves passion in this escellent poem! Yes, passion is a big part of love! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light shine upon you this lovely Valentines Day!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-02-15 10:10 AM


Hi Marsha,

This is a wonderful poem and I have to say Hot as well, enjoyed it much thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



DUSTY
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4 posted 2001-02-15 12:02 PM


mmmm yours and fire are heated desire
so warm and tender they are

Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-02-15 12:54 PM


Hot stuff. Love it.

Poeminister

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6 posted 2001-02-15 01:42 PM


very nice, Marsha

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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7 posted 2001-02-15 03:03 PM


Marsha~

now this girl is passion! HOT very HOT!
i think my screen caught on fire
this is excellent writing, full of much
emotion and sparks! loved this, i did!

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."


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