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laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2001-02-13 11:03 PM

Roses are red - but my screen is blue...
Like the depths of my feelings - embedded in you.

I lovingly touch you, in each secret place,
yet throes of my passion you calmly erase.

And added to that is repeated frustration -
"This program's performed an illegal op'ration"!

Is that how you treat one who offers her heart?
Who thinks of you always when we are apart?

Today I see red, and it's not from the day -
and thanks to your actions, my hair is more grey.

So don't even mutter, and don't you dare whine!
Dear computer, you're getting no sweet Valentine!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-02-13 11:07 PM

hehe... that made me snicker. I thought it was very cute, nice job on this!

Jeremy

Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2001-02-13 11:10 PM

How cute! I sometimes feel the same way...but I think I'll put those feelings aside and be nice to my computer tomorrow.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

3 posted 2001-02-14 01:49 AM

Lary, you are too clever for words, but you really have to talk nice to them, or they won't give you what you want.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

[This message has been edited by kcsgrandma (edited 02-14-2001).]

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2001-02-14 02:26 AM

::smiling::
this is so cute! a very enjoyable read ;-)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-02-14 02:30 AM

Heh-heh-heh LOL!!! Having a bad day with the mechanical monster? Love this cute piece.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-14 06:24 AM

GO for the real thing, you can only get so much from this screen! Loved this.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2001-02-14 07:10 AM

Good one.
I sharing your feeling.
Melton

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2001-02-14 03:04 PM

I love it! LOL. But I don't think they mind the threats... I swear every day I'm going to hoist mine out the window or put my foot through it... It just sits and smirks, knowing it's in control. *G* Thanks for the grins!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-02-14 04:00 PM

Laryalee,
Very cute, enjoyed the read.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-02-14 04:14 PM

When my computer tells me I've performed an illegal operation I feel like strangling the idiot that wrote that program...it should say "sorry try again" or something to that effect..hope you have a nice valentines day..James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-02-14 05:53 PM

Absolutely delightful ! What an enjoyable read!

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