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Pixydust
Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36


0 posted 2001-02-12 11:52 PM



ONLY YOU could make me feel
AS IF I were a diamond
You always say HOW SWEET am I
And will you be my CUTIE PIE
WHATEVER do I do DEAR ONE
To show MY LOVE for you
BE GOOD, BE TRUE, be ONLY YOU
The best that you can be
That's all I need in this REAL LOVE
For will you MARRY ME?!  

Pixydust

© Copyright 2001 Pixydust - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-02-13 12:42 PM


well pix...looks like we're the only candy heart poem takers....   

we done good...!  

i like your little ditty..(you cheated a little...but thats ok!!   )

to the top with ya before its valentines day already..

, g


"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
2 posted 2001-02-13 09:06 PM


very very very very cute. never looking at candy hearts the same way again. great job
peace and love
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-02-14 04:34 PM


hey! i can see you! this finally let me pull it up..so i'm bumping it back to the top cause maybe others were unable to view it for a while.. (anyway..i happen to like our little challenge )

hugs, g

dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
4 posted 2001-02-14 05:25 PM


Oh this is great! Very creative and wonderful write!


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2001-02-14 05:27 PM


This is delightful to say the least!
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