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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-02-07 08:27 AM


True Lovers Magic Kiss
By: Noah Eaton
2/6/01

True lovers lips meet
Locked lips embracing in passions heat
Warm breath of comfort sways in lovers mouths
Hearts flambeau lights in sparks, loves magic pours out

Soft lips begin to dance as lovers moan for more
The tingling, the vision they get, the one they’ve been striving for
The feeling of complete light and happiness, that this is true all so pure
Ocean of desire fondles in lovers mouthes, every breath another allure

Slowly, devoted lips caress on, your head tickles like a velvet glove massaging your mind away
Clearness of such beauty leaving born lovers breathless of words to say
As fingertips of brushfire scatter about lovers necks and face
Lullabied flames melting thumping hearts, nutritive love healing lusts sultry blaze

Lips swing in flamenco dance, moans and sighs of beauty reply
Meeting in grace, a hidden sun glowing in the wake of new loves sight
Pulling away gently and joining again in rhythm
Souls, spirits, hearts merging together in jollification

Small words of endearment spoken from hearts minstrel, between each soft pause
Throbbing twos heartstrings, His loves music conducted within, reciting loves songs
Breathed out from lovers feathered hearts is a sigh of thanks for God’s greatest gift
Becoming a whole message in the air, as His skyline smile radiates within lovers joined lips

Cupids arrow pierces lovers hearts, hastate of light melting within in jubilee
Lovers lips finally separate gently, but true love will forever stay, and everyone shall see
True lovers magic kiss speaking such sweet power into your life
Just one soft kiss from a lover can touch your heart with eternal light


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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1 posted 2001-02-07 09:50 AM


Beautifully written Noah.......great piece!

Nathan

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2 posted 2001-02-07 12:57 PM


Noah!....wow....

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-02-07 03:23 PM


Noah
Richly romantic.  Love it.  

Poeminister

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And let the face of God shine through."
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4 posted 2001-02-07 03:27 PM


Hey Noah this holds the wealth of romance and the beauty of the stars...wel done young man well done!!    ethome

Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination!

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-02-08 08:34 AM


Thank you for your beautiful comments, dear friends!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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