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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-07 01:59 AM

Swifter Currents

Why couldn't I've been born
a dolphin in the sea
If i weren't a man
I'd find peace naturally
somewhere beyond time, free,
beyond any conceived tense
all at once making sense
feeling only nature's tide-
in swifter currents
in swifter glide

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-07-2001).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-02-07 02:04 AM

If i weren't a man
I'd find peace naturally
Wisdom written beautifully.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-02-07 01:18 PM

wonderful thoughts....loved reading it very much my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

3 posted 2001-02-07 01:57 PM

I liked reading this poem, very good! AP

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-02-07 02:44 PM

or a woman.......(sigh)

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

5 posted 2001-02-07 02:48 PM

Hmm put back the bite of the apple of the tree of knowledge, become again an unqualified one with nature.

The longing at times so strong just to be.

Well said.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-02-07 05:04 PM

I like our new member's comment...so to that, I will say Ditto...

well done!

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

7 posted 2001-02-07 05:10 PM

This piece, aptly titled, moves the reader to commiserate with you. Would only that we were, yes? Nicely turned. (o:

Claire

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-02-07 11:45 PM

I love this.........I think I'd like to be a dolphin too........so graceful.........so beautiful.......sleek......nice, very nice

SEA

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-02-08 07:33 AM

PoeMinister~
Great enjoyment derived from these thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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