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A Secret Dream---PDV's Valetine Challenge
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A Secret Dream---PDV's Valetine Challenge |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hello I came here today With one thing on my mind A simple wish A secret dream A hidden desire I want to tell you All you mean to me How seeing you, talking to you Sends my heart soaring On eagle's wings To unimagined heights I want to touch you Tenderly softly passionately With my voice with my heart With all that I feel For the man you are And the woman you make of me Hello I come before you To whisper to your tender heart To offer you my own Hello I love you |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Paula~  this is WONDERFUL!!!!! I just love this! Excellent, challenge well met! ~SEA |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Paula, I don't know what the challenge was, but this is beautiful, so warm and tender. Hope there's someone ready to accept your offer. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful...and??? ARE there prizes for correct guesses?  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent!!! You certainly met the challenge..now let's see if your 'secret love' finds you! I've got my fingers crossed.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well. . . I won't offer any guesses. . . I'm always wrong. . . but I will say that this is a wonderful poem. . . the love just drips from it. . . it's perfect Paula. . . just perfect. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...thank you for the wonderful...you are so sweet kcsgrandma...the challenge is to write a poem to your secret love for valentines day...and I thank you for your sweet words... serenity...lol girl...DONT YOU DARE!!!!! the only prize you will get is thrown into the ocean LOL...thanks hon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OK LOL too many clicks PdV...thank you for issuing the challenge...and for giving me the chance to say whats in my heart...if he finds me because of it...so much the better... Sven...thank you so much...Im glad you can feel all the love...and as far as perfect goes...well I have a perfect inspiration |
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