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Two Paths |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Two Paths What fragrance this, to rouse me from my rest, My true love’s scent, and does she then remain? Or do my senses flaunt with cruelest jest, Exquisite torture, sweet, yet so profane. Yet always does she grace my inner sight, Just as she graced my arms this evening last, But morning’s advent reconfirms my plight, Alone again with memories amassed. If I must walk alone then grant me this, Her voice in every songbird’s serenade, And let me feel the softness of her kiss, Within the touch of nature’s lush brocade. For though our paths too seldom may converge, Within our hearts does perfect love emerge. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a lovely, fragile sonnet. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How lovely. corinne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was beautiful. So romantic!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I could read your sonnets over and over and over again....and then....I would start all over again!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ This is sheer beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
These are words to fall in love by...so very beautiful David |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*Sighs* The sonnet bandit striks again Beautiful work David, though I've come to expect no less. NOW GET SOME OF THESE SONNETS OUT TO SOME OF THE JOURNALS THAT SPECIALIZE IN ONLY SONNETS!!!!! ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
David, this one was really amazing. When it comes to sonnets you rock. Parker |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
sounds fantastic! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so magical and lovely to read. |
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Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
I like you wook I look forward to reading more. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
May I just say that I loved this? I don't know what else to say! "This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer. Rainer Maria Rilke from "Le |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
A lovely read. Cheers! Jon |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
You have a God-given talent for romance! That was, quite simply, beautiful. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
i doubt i could ever write a sonnet, and one as beautiful as this never...this is heart touching |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I almost didn't read this beautifully crafted sonnet, and what a shame it would have been to miss it! Very nice work. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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