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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Dawn crept up and woke me gently today Soft beauty carressing the shadows Soothing their turmoil Touching them with warmth Cleansing them of their darkness I close my eyes and wish it could heal mine To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To live truly in the moment, at least one of soft caressing..I would take even if it was the shadows doing it... I use to watch the shadows (mine) when I was a child and was never scared of them... ~S~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
ditto for me here...excellent expression.... Dawn is only a time to finally go to sleep after the torments of night....that is the soothe I finally recieve from her touch. nice work! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DreamKeeper~ Quite serenly lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
liked this one, very nice, AP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a moment captured well my friend. . . excellent. . ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes you captured the moment very good...have enjoyed the read. Charisma |
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