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A Fairy Tale
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A Fairy Tale |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
A Fairy Tale A fairy tale is where I wish we dwelt, Where happy endings wished for oft appear. And there your troubles soon would simply melt, To drift away along with all your tears. Alas no stallion white on which to ride, Nor sword with which to vanquish all your foes, No mystic means to sweep your fears aside, Is mine to wield against your mounting woes. And yet my sweet I love you oh so well, That deep inside my heart I’ve formed a place, For you and I in happiness to dwell, And rest our heads on pillows made of lace. Protected there in comfort safe and warm, Oblivious to every raging storm. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
David, I could literally read your sonnets all day long...*sigh*...sooooo beautiful! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful sonnet. You are a natural. This one is going in my library. Thanks for sharing.  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely written, enjoyed muchly. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
So you don't have a white stallion, who cares. You sir have a heart made out of gold and believe me thats all that's needed. Beautiful!!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Alas no stallion white on which to ride, Nor sword with which to vanquish all your foes, No mystic means to sweep your fears aside, Is mine to wield against your mounting woes. And yet my sweet I love you oh so well, That deep inside my heart I’ve formed a place, For you and I in happiness to dwell, And rest our heads on pillows made of lace. ======================= ya dont need no stallion, or sword ... not when ya have a pen of gold ... and it does have mystic means... it has sonnet secrets  very cool D2 ... as always your sonnets are a pleasure to partake in... even if they do leave me with poetic envy If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
David sometimes even I am awestruck, literally speechless this is utterly beautiful.  Love it excellant Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
David, you created your own happy ending. Well done! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
David, great write, great sonnet as always. Its always a joy to read these from you. parker |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
loved it and enjoyed the read....I love fairy-tales wonderful penned Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh how beautiful! Deb  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect and romantic. You have given her what she needs, without the castle or the white horse, with this gift of words. Sandra |
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