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In Darkness of Love (Sonnet)
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In Darkness of Love (Sonnet) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Darkness of Love Mind dwells in corners, where passions delight Images dancing behind closed eyes of A flight, pulsating to reach heaven's height Consumed, and recessed in scenes dark of love. Like tides drifting in, then cresting in verse Passions awakened before light each morn. Candlelight flickers, as hungers disperse Wildly you mold me, 'til I've been reborn. The past holds me tightly, wrapped lacings, black Shadows arresting my thoughts, upon walls. Memories of touching, tied, bound, no slack, Wishes, commanding, a voice in mine calls. Subtle caresses, nights reign holding true. Dreams cast their blending, wrapped I, then in You. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This read beautifully aloud...and in case ya didn't know, I do love a sonnet! Well done, m'lady! Hope that you are well! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I like I like!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, you write the night so well, and the (K)night of love...magic. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is wonderful Wynter. . . absolutely wonderful. . . seems to be sonnet Monday. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A lovely written poem, nakedthoughts..wonderful writing....peace! Nathan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so very lovely, so much so, IWIHWT... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - you are just one beautiful romantic writer, this is excellant. I really enjoyed this one, as I do your others. BC |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How romantic...and the title is perfect for it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
serenity, thank you for taking the time to actually read this aloud..I am feeling ok now although still worn out from the flu...huggsss Robert, so glad you liked it twice as much *s you are *cute* Kethry, I love the (K)nights don't you? *smiling* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like this sensuality!!! Kathleen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written |
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