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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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in one soft quiet tender moment there will you be of sun warm touch golden feels like two as we are made being joined being love and us ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A lot of love in a few words. Well done Sven. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
joined as one...what better way to say "love" wonderful sven....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Whats more beautiful than a two-in-oneness. Wonderfully penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, this is utterly divine, an absolute peach. I really love this one succinctly this is purely beautiful. Utterly stunning, and I love it of course. Thanks for this it joins its fellows in my library Take care love as always Bubbles  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey, quite a slender render here.... Well done! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
ahhhhhh, beautiful........ To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, De ja vue, your style pattern and words is reminiscent of a poem I have just completed called...Light the candle John! Lovely style, lovely emotion, tender render. write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
mmmm..love the us in these one...two... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Elizabeth. . .thank you. . . Greeneyes. . . thank you as well my friend. . . Poeminister, I have yet to find it. . .thank you. . . Bubbles. . . surely your library must be getting full!! Thank you my friend. . . Sunshine. . . it's me and that "few words" thing. . . thank you. . . dreamkeeper. . . thank you. . . Kethry. . . perhaps we were psychically communicating when I did this one. . . thank you my friend. . . Charisma. . . thank you. . . glad that you liked it. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Sir Sven, In moments of tender the quiet erupts into a warmth, rising in words shared, always, as they touch me. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very unusual presentation! Kathleen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A good one Sven, enjoyed. |
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