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Angel in Flight
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0 posted 2001-01-27 07:02 PM


Subdued and tranquil, with liquid eyes.
Audacity awaits the lamentation and sighs
Eyes luminescence effulgently though melancholy still.
A smile emerges through Hells semitransparent hill.
And as the tempest thrashes the cloaked vest.
You shall descry you’ve tried your best.
And so I expound permit the thunder roar.
Grant the lightening strike.
Have the tears pour.
For you’ll never encountering what you conceivable do.........
unless you let the storm come through.



What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


© Copyright 2001 Amanda - All Rights Reserved
Miracle
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since 2001-01-07
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1 posted 2001-01-27 09:17 PM


WOW!!! This is amazing! What a strong and powerful meaning you have here. Keep posting.
Angel in Flight
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2 posted 2001-01-28 04:10 PM


Miracle, Thank you so much. That means so much to me and i appreciate it dearly. Thank you for your reply.

What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda


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