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A Tyoe of Sleigh Ride
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A Tyoe of Sleigh Ride |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A type of Sleigh Ride I am a lover in love with love. Angels above and cupids arrows Velvet gloves and flights of doves And swiftly flying sparrows. I let my mind trapeze naive I wet it on the Isle of wile. Wear my heart upon my sleeve And trust in the fabric of smile. I'm what you see a cloth of sheer. Easy prey to the slightest yield I'm not a battlefield my dear. I have no shield that I would wield I'd grant what practical I could For I know the need for such glean But in my heart and mind I would Make you the fairest fair my queen. I'd wrap you on my sled of goal Snug and warm, in my bare of soul. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
On this cold, cold morning.... this warms me faster than raspberry tea.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Let it all hang out and bask in the sun. Excellent writing sir. Loved the dedication and the sincerity of the heart in this one. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I have a feeling that every day with you is a new Valentine opened. This is romantically beautiful. 'I let my mind trapeze naive I wet it on the Isle of wile. Wear my heart upon my sleeve And trust in the fabric of smile.' Wear on, sweet poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am a lover in love with love. Velvet gloves and flights of doves ================= I let my mind trapeze naive I wet it on the Isle of wile. Wear my heart upon my sleeve And trust in the fabric of smile. I'm what you see a cloth of sheer. Easy prey to the slightest yield ====================== I'd grant what practical I could For I know the need for such glean But in my heart and mind I would Make you the fairest fair my queen. I'd wrap you on my sled of goal Snug and warm, in my bare of soul. ============================ *smiling at Suns reply* *clinking mugs of rasbperry tea*  "I let my mind trapeze naive I wet it on the Isle of wile. Wear my heart upon my sleeve And trust in the fabric of smile." my oh my ... how I adore the way your poetic mind wanders. that verse is so flat cool and impressive ... that it makes me smile down to me toes. awesome sincere sweet write S-babes ... love the imagery of your mind on a trapeze and if I could ... for you ...Id make it snow for you ... Id do most anything ... ya know *winkiewinkie* later sleigh ride gator me "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you got the rhythm as always haa.. yes sometimes we think we are in love but its the feeling of love we love orat least the feeling of being in love. i think  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
There's snow on the ground where I live. i sure could use a sleigh ride right now Excellent poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea,, Then we'll have some raspberry tea too. *L* Mark, Thank you Mark I always enjoy your comments. Marge, Glad you enjoyed the sleigh ride. *L* JM, OK how about a sleigh ride on the beach. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Vic, It's a little of both. Thanks for the read and comment. Elizabeth, How about a ride and a hot chocolate on the beach instead. Love Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How lovely this is! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Your comment put you high on my sweetheart list. *L* Sy |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, Loved the ride this one took me on, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Cerenity I'm glad you enjoyed the ride. Big Hugs Sy |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I enjoyed your use of language in this. Any lady who would refuse to go on a sleigh ride with you must be crazy!  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kcsgrandma, Thanks for the sweet comp. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'd love to hear more about those velvet gloves! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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