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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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sharing the remnants of a broken dream we scatter them-- as stars across the night sky-- and hope in faith that each piece will one day find its mate; a dream come true... -dgvarner 2-89 (from the attic..!) < !signature--> "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-02-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A dreamer's wish...lovely thoughts... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece. We all want our "dreams come true", and sometimes we have to go through a few shattered dreams at first. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, wonderful, delightful, magic and amazing. Well that's the superlatives out the way, what can I say love this is fabulous, it truly is. A really great poem, this is what I was talking about, even stuff that you did ages ago is wonderful. You are a great poet, you really are. And when they present you with the equivilant of the Queens award for poetry, don't you forget us will you love.  Take care Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
G - Wish my attic had such treasures hidden in it! (Okay, so I don't have an attic, but you get the idea!)  Hope those dreams are on the way to coming true for you! hugsTo love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ I like this little bit of star-gathering ! 'we scatter them-- as stars across the night sky-- and hope in faith that each piece will one day find its mate' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
So simple and sweet, and so true of us all. I like this one a lot..... ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, I like this piece, it lives in the positive end of the universe.. Where we all should live and believe. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SUNSHINE..thank you LOVEBUG..yes, we have to endure the shattered dreams to appreciate the ones that come true.. MARSHA..many thanks to you !! and forget you?? not!  MAR..you'll have an attic one day if you dont yet i hope those dreams come true one day too... MARGE..thank you friend SHERI..thanks (and i like your quote..very interesting thought...!)PARKER..glad you liked thank you..i live moment by moment..dwelling in all different corners of the universe--this one was written on a day of belief hugs,g < !signature--> "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-02-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I need to go rummaging around in your attic!!! This had a gentle meandering feel to it...softly beautiful. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i thank you much SERENITY and the clutter in my attic is much more enjoyable when someone wants to rummage with me hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i know you KNOW that i love this one. short and sweet, but it says so much... 'each piece will one day find its mate; a dream come true...' a built-in promise... love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TRICKS..a built in promise.. cool i like it put that way ..hugs, g |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh dg...love this dreamy one. hope that your wish come true. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, Your words skip across the page with a dream like quality, Very well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Life is an ever-changing puzzle that causes us to seek the perfect fit the piece that we carry with us and you have penned it wonderfully my friend. Now, did you find that cafe yet? A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short concise yet tells so much... so you have been writing for almost 10 years?gosh, this is only my first year... bows bashfully to his senior cum mentor |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
aw thanks kaile! about 17 yrs writing now...but bow not bashfully--as i stand beside you..not above you hugs, gale "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oops! i'm so sorry dennis and mark...i thought i'd replied to you already..must have been in my mind! lol of course, as always i love to hear from you ..both! thank you so much for your replies!!  and no, mark..i've yet to find that cafe..you'll keep my coffee warm for me?? hugs, gale |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Loved this one..How we all wish for that "dream come true"...Your words were few, but so Oh-to-the-point.. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wonderful writing. My life has gotten scattered into the wind before. Broken into so many differant parts that I thought I could never have put it back together. I was right. I could not do it. It came together on its own all i had to do is to keep on keeping one the right path. Your poem touched me and I could relate to your words. Love and Light, Richard |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
excellent poem, loved it. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LL..i thank you friend poet! RICHARD..words of wisdom you leave at my doorstep glad you enjoyed..BRIAN..so good to see you again and so happy you stopped in to read me! thank you for your reply..hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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