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Remembering Senryu's |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Remembering you sadness radiates through me I miss you so much ~*~ My dear sweet Aunt Sue how could I ever forget you are my hero ~*~ Always there for me now I say a prayer for you peace be with your soul ~SEA~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
These are beautiful SEA  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, I can't do these either, but you quite obviously can, this is beautiful. Really wonderful tribute to your beloved aunt, she is looking down at you and sending you her love. I know it, because she has to be for you to have loved her so. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I loved these, especially the first one. So gentle and delicate. Beautiful. Have a question.....what is the difference between a senryu and a haiku (sp?)??? To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ thank you Marsha~ yes you can! Try DreamK~ I was recently told that a Haiku has to do with nature and a senryu has to do with other stuff, I haven't quite got it all figured out yet either, just hoping I'm doing them right -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- oh my...these are absolutely beautiful. some of the most lovely senryu i've ever read...wonderful. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky~ thank you, my Aunt Sue is the Queen of my heart.....I miss her so bad....... -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
SEA, well, you are doing fine!! these forms are real addictive, arent they?  liked the first senryu especially |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it seems this time year brings out the sad senyru's in us... thank you for sharing |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
These display your talent and your heart. Thanks for sharing. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear SEA I can see in these that you miss your aunt Sue so very much and I'm so sorry that she is no longer with you in person but she will always live on in your heart and soul and most certainly in your words ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Memories arise holding your spirit alive guardian angel. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sea she will be on your side as your guardian angel. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My sweet friend, not only did you do them perfectly but you poured the love of your heart into them and I just know that she is smiling down on you right now and sitting on your shoulder as well. She will never be gone from you because of your love and your memories of her that you cherish and hold so dear to you. Hugs to you my friend and know that she is there whenever you need her. |
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