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DreamSeeker
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 72


0 posted 2000-11-21 07:52 PM


And Unto Each
A Star Is Assigned

Some Distances
Revealing

Others
Concealing

Dream On
Dream On Ye Seeker

Light Years
To Be SeeFeel

ALL For The
Seeing
Eye

Each A Soul Blazing

Lighting The Universe
We Have Made
Candles Sight Guides

This Universe Ours
One And  One Plus Self
Equals Infinity

Defines Eterinty


And The Days
That They Linger
They Are Nothing
To You At All
Yet You Remain

And The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Give

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-21 08:25 PM


I just worked out the math on this DS and it works just right one and one plus self equals unlimited extent of time, space or quantity....like boundlessness...yeah I like this poem it works for me big time!!  Good write!!
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-11-21 09:48 PM


I did not go into the math of it, but the seefeel of it delights me totally......

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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