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Toerag
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0 posted 2000-11-19 11:35 AM


Now was right then
When it was
And here it comes again
Right then

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suthern
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1 posted 2000-11-19 11:37 AM


Makes it tough to ever get to tomorrow, doesn't it? *S* I like this, sweets!

If you're skedaddling off to church, I guess I'll have to wait for an answer on whether you'd like satsumas with your turkey... *S*

(But you'll just think light moves quickly if you say okeydokey. *G*)

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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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2 posted 2000-11-19 03:39 PM


Now it says, and then the moments gone.

Toe, set it back a few hours so you can come and play!  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
3 posted 2000-11-19 04:07 PM


couldna been then cause it's now... no.. now.. no... now.. no.. now.. no ... now

jeezh  

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2000-11-19 04:45 PM


In a way it kind of bothers me that I understood this so well...oh well a poet's thoughts...I think???   take care...ethome
Corinne
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state of confusion
5 posted 2000-11-19 05:36 PM


No better time than the present, is there?


Corinne

Michael
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6 posted 2000-11-19 07:05 PM


Wow - that was deeply profound... or profoundly deep... or something, I think...




Good to see ya around, Toe...

Michael

Mattster
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7 posted 2000-11-19 07:22 PM


Interesting piece. It is - different.
Balladeer
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8 posted 2000-11-19 07:25 PM


Does Mickey still wear gloves?  
lucky
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9 posted 2000-11-19 09:02 PM


Toe... Now I was born in the late forties and lived through the sixties, now it's two thousand... Are you lost again..? lucky, you sure are bubba... I could say alot about this.... LOL. I'm not sure but I think I like you. Was that your real toe..?

Keep 'em coming buddy.............end


Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
10 posted 2000-11-19 11:41 PM


Where did you buy your watch? Mine doesn't talk and I'd like to ask Santa if he could get me one like yours.
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
11 posted 2000-11-20 06:13 AM


Geez Toe,
your watch sounds like my time zone which is always before, it ever was. *Laffs*
Be well
I aint gonna say write on, cause I didn't understand this one, or I did understand it and that worries me.
Keth


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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