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Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2000-12-07 02:10 PM

If you are viewing this by the light of Darkness,
that illuminates the night,
so much the better;
for there are things
that only darkness dares reveal.
And if we arrogantly say
that only Dark obscures things,
then, why not Light?
And should we foolishly contend
that only Day reveals things,
then, why not Night? ...
And every one knows what the night is for ...

First, it might be best
he does not know what you are doing,
what you are thinking, and planning ...
for he has learned enough
and lived enough to know
that talk is cheap,
that almost anyone
can buy the gifts
and learn to say the words.
And you must love him to begin.
Don't wait to say you care
until the end,
else he simply won't believe you.
phone him first;
More than once or twice,
but not too many times,
just enough to tell him
you are different,
just enough to show him
that you care.
[K >
And when you ask him what he likes, do it directly;
and should he be uncertain,
Take his hand,
handle him with kind and gentle patienceand he will reward you
by telling you the truth,
and he will come
to love you all the more;
and you will have his confidence
for LIFE!
When you know that he is out,
show up at his favorite haunt,-
where he least expects to see you.
Travel as he does,
And bring your friends to meet him too,
and let him hear you tell
how you adore him.
And when you are at table,
wait on him.
notice what hi likes;
keep his plate and glasses full.
Indulge him,
quietly,
so no one else need know,
just he, and you.
Tell him how you love to watch
his face in fascination--
the ever-changing panorama
of his moods
that flicker there,
the roiling, beating passions
of his heart
that mirror there.
Tell him how you love to hear
the rhythm of his voice,
the cadence of his words,
Killing you softly
with his song,
the way he makes you cry,
the way he makes you think, and smile, and laugh,
the way he lets you see
all the color, light and music
filling and resounding
in his soul.
And do not rearrange your world for him
don't try to reorder his own;
for he has had enough
of people doing that.
Do not bend over backwards just to please him,
for he will know that you are doing it,
see that you are faking it.
It is better to be direct, FORWARD and true.
It is better to be genuine and real.
Remember
not to get too close too soon;
he may be wary.
Don't be discouraged if he says
he doesn't want to get involved,
because your friendship is for LIFE!
You know more
of what is in his heart
than he, at first,
may think you do.
Well ... ...
Isn't this more fun
than doing housework?

Jaime

All that you are seeking is also seeking you

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

1 posted 2000-12-07 02:14 PM

Hi everyone,
Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who reads my poems....and to let you know I am still working on a way to be able to reply to you...please remember to email me...thanks

Jaime

All that you are seeking is also seeking you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-12-07 02:15 PM

I see your point...nice thoughts...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-12-07 02:30 PM

Jaime, indeed, this works both ways...and is SO much more fun than housework!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2000-12-07 04:33 PM

Jaime I have to agree with my poet pal Sunshine this does work both ways but then why couldn't the reader... male or female take it the way that it suits them from their perspective...poetry is about sharing a distinct type of language different from the norm and you sure have done that very well here and the perspective of the reader is going to differ but all will enjoy I gaurantee.....well done !! ethome

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2000-12-08 01:02 AM

Jaime...this is outstanding work my sweet friend...echoing Sushine and ethome...it can be seen from both sides...but it sure gave me some things to think about...how to reach out to a man...to softly seduce him...perfect sweet friend just perfect

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2000-12-08 09:40 AM

yes, it is more fun

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman

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