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Open Poetry #10

The detail of a flower

PeterPeter
Junior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 30
British, London

0 posted 2000-09-24 01:09 PM

The Detail of a Flower

Have you ever looked into my eyes
Have you ever seen all the colors
my pod, first hides

Blues, Reds, Yellows
As time goes by
you’ll see them
You’ll mellow

But don’t wait too long
For you will surely miss
My moment of beauty
Gone with a kiss

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 2000-09-27 12:03 PM

Welcome! And wonderful details they are! Stop and smell the roses..they don't last too long for sure!

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-09-27 06:49 PM

I have seen all these things in this poem. . .

Well done my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2000-09-27 07:34 PM

All the seasons of life have their own beauty...even as they die...I have noticed...enjoyed your poem.< !signature-->

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 09-27-2000).]

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2000-09-27 09:28 PM

PeterPeter,

Welcome to Passions

This is a lovely poem.. I definately like it

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-09-27 09:31 PM

~This is such a neat, neat poem. It really breathes itself....well written. Take care. *Peace.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2000-09-27 09:45 PM

Beauty of a flowers first kiss!
I truly do love this!

Deb

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2000-09-27 11:27 PM

~PeterPeter
This is your first piece that I've read. I really liked this one a lot. You have combined two of my favorite things...flowers and kisses hehe. Excellent imagery and beautiful poem you have here.
Take care.
Amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

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