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Crawling Up Your Arm (Halloweenie Treat)
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Crawling Up Your Arm (Halloweenie Treat) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Crawling Up Your Arm What do you feel in the middle of the night? What wakes you up with horror and fright? What is that thing crawling in your bed? Moving so slowly from toes to head Will it bite? Will it sting? What deadly poison will it bring? Slowly crawling up your arm Do you cry out Raise the alarm? Or do you dare let out a scream And hope that this is only a dream? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Poet deVine- oh now...that's just mean! now i'm not going to be able to sleep...lol.  This is cute. I like it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't worry it is only me looking for something to nibble on.LOL good think I wasn't planning on sleeping tonight.LOL Excellent PdV |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you both for your replies so late at night. Mark if that was you, you have really hairy legs!  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is creepy..I know that feeling...waking up in a panic that something is on you, and not knowing if it was a dream or not. For me, its usually spiders that I dream about (SHUDDERS...or at least I hope I only dream about them)crawling on me. A terrible fear....Nice work here, Devine. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*shivers* I hate those creepy crawley thingies...great poem, Sharon! Denise |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Egad how I hate those crawly things....this one has left me with goosebumps! Just a word of caution...do not scream....it is written somewhere that every human will swallow at least 6 spiders in their lifetime, just because they sleep with their mouths open....I haven't had a good nights sleep since I heard that! Just thought I share that little piece of trivia.... Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Yipes! Glad I'm reading this hours before bedtime Sharon ... it'll give me time to recuperate! Wonderful crawly tale! (and Bonnie ... oh I didn't need to hear that, ack!) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yuck...*rubbing my arms of*....shivering...don't like that crawly feeling...and its almost bedtime for me, so better check everything out.... love the poem~~~~~ ~~~~Charisma |
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Horizon Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 51 |
What a fun Poem, I loved this! and I for one always tuck the sheets under my feet. hehe |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
I, for one, hope that it is only a dream! Very cute! Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
oooh you've given me the creepy crawlies "shiverrrr" heheeh This was great Sharon enjoyed it very much. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
I welcome even the creepy ones. . . Thanks Sharon, I like this |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hmm...if that were me, I'd probably shriek and try to shake it off. Then I'd have a heck of a time trying to fall back asleep. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
now how did that itsy bitsy spider get out of the spout again???????????? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Watch out... I think he's got friends...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nope. I just tell him to leave me alone, and then I go sleep on the sofa! Okay...I'm gonna be good now...geez, (shrug) just don't WHAT is wrong with me these days! Much fun, PdV! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you're creepy pdv creepy yuh |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Crabs Sharon???!!!  Love your sense of humor lady!  |
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