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LOVE UNITED................(First Meeting)
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LOVE UNITED................(First Meeting) |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
All this talk about electronic love has made me stop and reminisce of all the things that happened that led to true loves kiss Words just started flowing from one into the other I felt as if I knew him in one world or another Then I finally heard it his voice across the line in awe of how he sounded felt a shiver down my spine We talked for endless hours on into the night I never talked like that before God..it felt so right I still had never seen him had no physical of his being we exchanged simple pitcures could not believe what we were seeing My eyes could not leave him although only on my screen so beautiful in every way like no man I had ever seen My beauty captured him also like no woman he had seen as if we both had come to life from each others dreams We knew we had to meet How and When and Where? driving he said..three weeks I'll be comming there Twenty hours to see me this was the final moment my palms started sweating my stomach was in torment I was pacing here and pacing there talking on the phone Oh my god....he's ummmmmm, here I, I, really gotta go..... I looked up and he was grinning calmly leaning against my door we were both a little nervous as we had'nt seen each other before slowly I walked over and our eyes finally met nervousness went out the door as fast as it was sent We held each other tightly breathing each other in just getting closer and closer skin finally upon skin We pulled apart slowly eyes lost in each other lips finally touching hearts filled with wonder Tounges touched worlds collided we knew then our love united Three months since I've seen him and I won't see him till November I know the day he gets off the plane will be a day we'll both remember.. Jenn E [This message has been edited by Jenn E (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like you have found the one of your dreams and it turned out to be a dream that you could actually touch. I am so happy for you and you have shared it with us so well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when our dreams become reality... fate is the keeper of the dreams... hold on to your dreams ... take care poet-girl  jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.....I love it when there is something happy to look forward to, and it sounds like the meeting in November will be just that!! I am happy for you, my friend..... Cherish the moments!! (Great write!!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jenn, You have perfectly described my situation  I have been talking to my love for over a year now. However, we haven't had the chance to meet (due to circumstances..the plans had to be changed) I can only pray our meeting goes as well as yours rp25 |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Mark* Thank you.....yes, touching your dreams does feel rather nice. Oh.....I was'nt drinking coffee earlier honest......lol Janet* Thank You.......hold on I will.... Sunny1* Thanks a bunch......cherish them I will....... rp25* A lady who understands....yes....I hope your meeting goes well, fate just has a way of dong it's own thing for reason's we don't always understand. Warm Wishes Jenn E |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Jenn E This was very well written. November sounds like a month that you already have planned out, especially the day he arrives. It's nice to know that someone has found love. Best of luck in November. Garfield |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
JP* .......back at ya......Thanks...ggrn3* Thank you.....I am looking forward to November..... Jenn E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Happy for you that your dreams are coming true...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Keep us up to date please! Kathleen |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
What a bunch of voyeurs!!!  hehe |
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