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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-10-04 11:13 AM

Go I

Adrift on blue sea of tranquility
I attempt to capture glimpses of serenity.
Away, Away from the tumultuous flow
Go I, by your grace, where cool breezes blow,
To serene space where warm smiles glow,
To slower pace where deep troubles turn mellow
And the light of your love you bestow on me,
Go I.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

1 posted 2000-10-04 11:24 AM

I've no name for this form - but I do have a name for the poem: Beautifu!!!

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-10-04 11:51 AM

Sweet of you Wilfred...thank you!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-10-04 12:00 PM

and go you do...with melody and harmony
I love the flow of this..
as well as the promise and optimistic view
lovely work here...
very nice indeed ...
putting in my library so i can have another go

jm

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2000-10-04 12:09 PM

My heart does a little lurch when someone thinks enough of a poem to tuck it away for a second look. It humbles me. It sounds trite when I say I'm very happy you enjoyed it....but I mean it whole heartedly.

Thank you, Janet!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

5 posted 2000-10-05 10:43 AM

Mmmmm... How peaceful I feel now. Your poem is like taking a deep calming breath. This is great when things like classes start ot muddy you down. This is great!

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2000-10-05 11:00 AM

A calming effect is what
I was trying to achieve.

Smiling here that you
felt it as well. . .

Thank you, Waverly917 !

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

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