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It's almost in reach! |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I've searched along a path, that I have learned to walk alone. At first I felt the cold around, and wouldn't let it in. I opened up, and only found the pain I hid inside. It took some time to realize, it was nothing I could hide. The path I led began to turn, the colors slowly turned. The browns began to wither, and the reds and purples bloomed. The beauty I was searching for, has now appeared in sight. I only have to look inside, and wander towards the light. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tulip~ Lovely positive thoughts .... keep your eyes on the light ! Enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
tulip- very nice write. you speak truth here. we must first find peace within ourselves before we can find it anywhere else.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Keep going towards the light. This is a great poem! It is so positive! Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Marge, Thank you, I think I'm finally headed in the right direction! Vicky, It's been a process that has been hard, but I think I'm getting through it. Abra, Thank you! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful thoughts here, Tulip... hard sometimes to see that inner light - but I believe it always there. Hugs K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I liked this one alot. You have a gift with imagry and flow. Thanks for the great read. Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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