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dark doubt. . . from Marina's poem
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dark doubt. . . from Marina's poem |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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doubt the stars they're really not there what light do they cast? none so don't bother to see them doubt the angels they don't really sing with what wings do they fly? none so don't bother to hear them doubt the time it doesn't really exist with what hands does it move? none so don't bother to think it today, I am in hell are you sure you want to come? my friend? have I taught you nothing? where I am is where you'll be and I'll be waiting for you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ this is dark and kinda scary, great poem!  -SEA |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Interesting. So Spooky. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, thank you. . .that's just what I was going for. . . Effigy, thank you ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Creepy, I like this one. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Abra, creepy eh? Thank you. . . when I first read Marina's poem. . . I wanted to go in this direction. . . an opposite. . . keeping the line, but in a different light. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This was way cool. I like the way you styled this poem. Lots of chilvaric emotions from you. Is that a word? *L* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nah, sorry, I've got to believe...way too bouyant and full of light to not believe in miracles, angels, stars, and that time will bring all things good and wonderful... Oh yes Sven, my middle name IS "Pollyanna!" But you did frighten a response right out of me! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Poetic Knight. . . yes I do believe that "chivalric" is a word! LOL Thank you. . . Sunshine. . . or should I say "Pollyanna"?  And I believe too. . . but sometimes, you have to be "realistic". . . or so I've been told. . . and then again. . . you have to decide if you're going to be realistic or living the dream. . . thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well come on get out of there, once you're in hell there's no place to go but up, we can get out can't we? This IS scary, just right for the season. Kathleen |
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