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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-10-03 01:54 AM


I saw fire's flicker,
entrancing,
rhythm in my soul
came dancing,
I looked into a gypsy's eyes,
reflections of myself despised,
but laughter sparked
into the night
and warmth within
the heart arise,
uncaring of the thought of singe,
I'm ready now, to dance again.
Kick off your shoes
and feel the sand.
I'm ready, for
you gypsy man...


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-10-03 02:34 AM


I saw fire's flicker,
entrancing,
rhythm in my soul
came dancing,
I looked into a gypsy's eyes,
reflections of myself despised,
but laughter sparked
into the night
and warmth within
the heart arise,
==================

oh baby ..you look so lovely dancing round the fire...
flame glow is your color girl  
*sigh*... my my my ...
when will we ever learn me sweet???
the perverbial moth drawn to the flame ...
good thing me wears singe-proof mascara
*winkiewinkie*
YA KNOW I LOVE THIS ONE...RIGHT??
yea  YOU KNOW ...
ya know me loves ya too .. yea you know
goodnight me twin ...
tis been a long one ...time to sleep this one away
see ya in the morn...(yea I know NOT TOO EARLY)
I'll bring the raspberry tea

tracie66
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2 posted 2000-10-03 06:16 AM


OOOh what a delightful poem to read, very enjoyable  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-10-03 01:46 PM


JM---wanted to thank you, for taking the time for me, as you always do...it means much to me...I love ya, gratefully...

Tracie66--thank you as well, for your sweet reply...I have been enjoying your work as well.  

Hugs to you both.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-10-03 08:32 PM


so you are dancing around the fires again are ya???   So when does one REALLY learn...or does it even matter that we do?  Excellent write from you my friend.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-04 03:53 AM


Once more around the fire please.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2000-10-04 07:33 AM


Serenity~
Enjoyed the dancing merriment -

'laughter sparked
into the night
and warmth within
the heart arise'


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-10-05 07:06 PM


Thanks twice to Mark, hugs m'friend...

and Marge, methinks you've danced around a fire once or twice before yourself!  Big Hugs for you as well....

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-10-05 07:56 PM


I loved the images this brought to mind Serenity! Wonderfully picturesque ... with such positive conviction, much enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-10-05 08:48 PM


Submit!!!!

Loved the imagery in this one, serenity!  

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