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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2000-10-02 10:43 PM


Love Past Midnight


Love fresh as the morning air
this new love, found when the sun
had already set

Time we choose to celebrate
not to change the meaning of
kindred spirits that met on a full moon
laughed at the sight, knowing it's well
past midnight

Weep with me while I bow on my knees
help me escape this heated race
run with me in the sun
it's really all in innocent fun

BloomingRose

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Wilfred Yeats
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1 posted 2000-10-02 10:48 PM


from the bright moonlight to the shining sun - and all in 'innocent' fun -- lovely just lovely -
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-10-02 10:56 PM


BR~ VERY NICE (to say the least)   -SEA
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-10-03 07:25 AM


Time we choose to celebrate
not to change the meaning of
kindred spirits that met on a full moon
laughed at the sight, knowing it's well
past midnight

Weep with me while I bow on my knees
help me escape this heated race
run with me in the sun
it's really all in innocent fun

Now how much fun is this?????   ALOT I tell ya....really....time to frolick in innocense in the morning dew I believe.   Excellent write my friend.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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4 posted 2000-10-03 07:37 AM


Lovely piece BR
  
Tracie~
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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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5 posted 2000-10-03 08:56 AM


Wilfred- Glad you like  

SEA- Thank You  

Mark- Fun? Yes it is!

Tracie- Glad you like this. Thanks for the rolling smiley! So cute!

May you all have a bright sunny day! Deb  



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