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Open Poetry #10

Residue ( an old memory)

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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0 posted 2000-09-29 11:51 AM

Residue

my mind in darkness
reaches out
to take you in

thought trembles
to the whispers heard
from rhythms
of your touch

here, there
where fingertips
brush velvet dreams

here, there
where lips caress
liquid chambers

here, there
where thoughts entwine
and bodies melt

and life's breaths
are in between
you, me

motionless
in a still room...

M
*99

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-09-29 12:19 PM

M...
Oh....there is a lot of meaning within the lines of this extremely well-written poem. The title alone captured my eye, and the thoughts enclosed are worthy of many more reads.
I enjoyed this tremendously!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-09-29 02:29 PM

Sunny1
sometimes when I am at my lowest I go back to a better time...withdraw a poem from my first year of writing...and post it...at least then I can *feel* something instead of the numbness that keeps invading my soul
~~soft thanks
M

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-09-29 02:32 PM

Now this one reads like a good remedy should. Hold onto these memories and KNOW that you will soon be making more pleasent memories elsewhere to come back to. Lovely and sensuous write.

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-09-29 11:36 PM

waiting patiently for the pleasant...thank you Mark
~~soft hugs always for your kind words
Maureen

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2000-09-30 05:40 AM

Left breathless phew... excellent piece.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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6 posted 2000-09-30 09:58 AM

brian
anytime I can leave someone breathless...well...well...I am at a loss for words..
thank you dear, "I needed that"
Maureen

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