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Her eyes
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Her eyes |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Her eyes are wonders to behold Once within their gaze I cannot look away. Flecks… Blue tranquil oceans Soft gray down. Delicate green ferns Sweet Cinnamon brown. Sparkles… Dancing waves of glimmers Reflecting peaceful skies Drifting among dreams Clouds full of sighs Tears… Gentle falling rain Diamond clear drops Wiped tenderly away Sorrow now stops Her eyes are a wonder to behold Once within their gaze Is where I always want to stay. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ this is so nice.......I like the way you described the colors..."Sweet Cinnamon brown" yep, that's me.....  -SEA |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Ron, both the rhythm and the wording of this tender missive are enchanting. What wonder lies within the eyes. Very nice, thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Flecks… Blue tranquil oceans Soft gray down. Delicate green ferns Sweet Cinnamon brown. Very beautiful Ron..loved it...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nice job ron yuh good flow..o tears yuh |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Windows to the soul...and when it's right...a reflection of our own...beautiful work~ |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Hey...I LIKE!!! My eyes are green.. "like delicate green ferns"? Would love it if mine were described this way! Good poem! Kitty |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
A very romantic poem. The eyes do tell quiet a story. Enjoyed much. Tessa |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
All kittys have delicate fern green eyes...(except siamese of course...and uh burmese too...well most...just like you) Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Romantic view. Eyes can show so much love, and beauty. Wonderfully written. Sandra |
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