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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Solar dawn explodes the sky- < !signature-->A lone diamond of the night, Seeking passion, ‘fore all else- As now, my hand has been dealt. Crystal clear, the sea does rage- Upon an unmarked, hollow page, Yet to be discerned from eye- Of Sacred greeting, by and by. Dark reflections, of days now gone- A mellow, grinding side of song. Soon to be swallowed in peace- Banned of heart, no more repeat. On the way, shine fields of grace, Pouring down to spray my face- As realization finally stirs- Deception now a single blur. Creasing pain shall not linger- ‘Neath the softly burning cinder, Douse the fire, kill the flame- Only then shall truth remain. So to the pain, I bid solemn adieu- In recollect of passing through- The gates of love, purely divine, Might they find me, another time. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (edited 04-18-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
is it bout losin love then seein yuh maybe i was beein foolish cuz now i can see w/o binders???? maybe huh?? answer!! goooood poem yuh All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay kiddo, What you doin awake anyhow girl, This is really good except for that last line. Now we don't really want them finding us later do we, that happenen to me once, I didn't care for it that they found me in another time..? Good stuff blondie |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I love the next to the last stanza...it has such fire and verve. It almost sounds as if you are ready to fight. You are graduated from tease. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Creasing pain shall not linger- ‘Neath the softly burning cinder, Douse the fire, kill the flame- Only then shall truth remain. Loved this stanza....Really strong and powerful. I like this Devina. Hey I was reading this at work and guy here looking over my shoulder said he was dying to meet you....hehe What can I say....I told him I would tell you  A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
loved the last verse....great stuff girl  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Walt- how well you read into me dear...can I say "bingo" here? *L* lucky- and blondie thanks you sweetie!! Haven't been called that for awhile!! Just hoping to one day find those beautiful gates of love open...I know whatcha mean though!! Rob- Fight, eh? LMAO...I get pretty wicked yah know?! And hun...I've never been a tease.. First Knight- Thank you hun...now about your friend...does he own a black stallion to carry me away? Corazon- thanks to you girl!!! Much emotion coming from my end lately..go figure!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Hehe...I can't believe I am doing this but....he has a black truck....but no mustang....LOL A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Love you sis!! Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always [This message has been edited by amber (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
An ouch. A sigh. Sorry, wiped nose on sleeve...guess you wouldn't want that hug now? Love to you, and it will come... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
First Knight- You're too cute man!!! ROFL at you!!! Trucks are good... (too bad he's not a little closer to California!!!!)Amber- Love you too sis!! serenity- I know it will come one day, I'm not sure if I can handle ONE more time when it doesn't!! And I always need those hugs girl! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Devina, I know where this is coming from. . . you have said it quite well with this one. . . They will find you again my friend. . .perhaps sooner than you think . . .I know. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Devina, I know where this is coming from. . . you have said it quite well with this one. . . They will find you again my friend. . .perhaps sooner than you think . . .I know. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Loved the poem devina...great as always. Marina Sven....will you take your danm hand off the buzzer! This is not Jeapordy! Sorry devina, gotta keep him in check. Sven are you listening to me! ( Marina yelling down hall...I know you can hear me....) [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven- I know you know.. Thanks for the TLC when I needed it m'friend!! Marina- Yep, keep em in check dear...you're quite good at that!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Devina, I know that you know that I know. . . what are friends for? And I hear you yelling Marina, I'm just not listening! LOL And who's going to keep you in check? ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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