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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-27 08:58 PM


~ ~ ~
Bronzed baby shoes
giving me the blues,
bring with a tear my yesteryear;
her dear emphatic twos.
Who knew how much we’d lose?
~ ~ ~
Tones of gold in browns, and shaded,
sing to me how life’s been jaded;
coming undone; reflections run;
epoch sweet by death invaded.
Our realm now compressed and faded.
~ ~ ~
Daughter of mine;
love so rich and fine
still haunting me from memory,
time after lonely time.
Chanting in somber rhyme.
~ ~ ~


 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.



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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2000-04-27 09:04 PM


Sweet Rosemary, I know those bronzed memories of two, I know a velvet dress and hand knit sweater....you are blessed to have such beautiful words to tell your grief.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-04-27 10:14 PM


Your grief is so sweetly written, within your words, your twins will live forever.
God Bless  

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